Well done for including some media theory and for writing in so much detail about your work. T: 1. you need to include more screenshots of existing videos that have influenced your work. You have done this more effectively on the slide where you explore visual styles, but just ensure it's sustained! 2. You need to include more theory throughout your work e.g. the section on narrative.
Well done for including some media theory and for writing in so much detail about your work. T: 1. you need to include more screenshots of existing videos that have influenced your work. You have done this more effectively on the slide where you explore visual styles, but just ensure it's sustained! 2. You need to include more theory throughout your work e.g. the section on narrative.
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